the monkey on a boat

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The monkey on a boat

A long time ago, there was a pet ape named joe but not just an ordinary ape an ape that could talk, that could write and could draw. One day he went missing. He went off on a trip to Monkey Island on a boat with pirates. He jumped on the boat and asked, “Hi nice to meet you all, can i come to Monkey Island ?” All ten of the pirates expressed, “ We would love to have you.” But two of them were nasty pirates and they were planning something evil so they could get joe off the boat. “ The captain's name is Peter,” stated one of the pirates, “ and I think he wants us all to go to bed.”

“Wake up!” Yells peter. “The sail has been set the wrong way, who did this?” “I think it was the little monkey,”  suggested the nasty pirates. “It wasn't me and i'm not a monkey i'm an ape!!!” Screamed joe. “See he's just a vicious little monkey,”yelled the nasty pirates. “We’ll see tomorrow what's gonna happen,”explained peter, “start sailing the boat that way!” “Go to bed monkey, we've got no need for you,”says the nasty pirates. So he went off and cried,cried and cried. But then he overheard them plotting to get him and then the pirates went to sleep.

He got the swords and went into the captain's bedroom and killed him with the swords. Everyone else that night got killed as well. The boat got smashed by the kraken and it took joe to monkey island. Too be continued ...