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S.O.S: Adjectives,adverbs.
Jonah Lomu
Jonah Lomu is as big and strong as a bull elephant charging through the scrub. He is so tough he played all his games for the all blacks with a kidney disorder. With thighs like thunder that he used to crash over opponents.
His hair is as black as coal and the style is just a little tuft of fuzzy hair. His shiny brown eyes are underneath his heavy black eyebrows with the number 11 shaved on. His lips are as big as a blown up balloon. His teeth are as white as the keys on a piano. He has a big bulky nose to sniff out the next person he will bowl over.
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